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Texto de 55elena_jv - English

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  • I adore sunrises and sunsets.
  • For me, they are the best part of the day.
    • In winter I live in the city, where windows are on the east.
    • You know, of course, that the sun moves along the ecliptic during a year.
    • It rises not exactly on the same place each day, but shifting.
    • It moves to the left when daylight hours increase, then reaching the nordest part of the ecliptic, it turns back and moves to the right and the daylight hours decrease.
    • I’m lucky - the whole way of the sun, from the Nord to the south is in front of my window.
    • I like opening my window and feel cold fresh morning air looking as the sun appears.
    • In that moment the day is pure and innocent like infant, it hasn’t yet been marked by life’s sorrows.
  • It is really a gorgeous moment.
    • In summer, living by the sea, I more often see off the sun.
    • And here I’m also lucky.
    • Just as the place of the sun rises are shifting, just the same its sets are shifting too.
    • During the warm period I can see all places where the sun is setting sinks in the waters of the Baltic.
    • This picture is also beautiful, even though it bears a different seal.
    • It’s light and even pleasant sadness by bygone day, one more summer day which left us...
    • I wish you always be able to slow down and enjoy such simple joys as sunrises and sunsets.

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