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- I stood listening to spring.
- I stood listening to spring, She told a lot, She sang the loud ringing song, Then she whispered secretly-softly.
She sang to me about love, hopes, youth, and joy.
She sang to me the song again, That my dreams sang to me for a long time.

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- I stood listening to spring, She told a lot, She sang the loud ringing song, Then she whispered secretly-softly.
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- I stood listening to spring,¶
  She told a lot,¶
  She sang ~~the~~a loud ringing song,¶
  Then she whispered secretly- yet softly.
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- She sang to me the song again, That my dreams sang to me for a long time.
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