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- First post in english
- Hello everyone, i write in english for the first time here in polyglot club.
- I always write in french , because this is the language which i really love.
- My english is understable , i guess.
- But i want to improve it more and more.
- I read and listen a lot in english, then this make it easier than if i don't read and listen nothing at all.
- I make some stupid mistakes, the basic ones, because i not practise.Well.. i here because this.
- I'm almost forget this : i'm brazilian and i can help anyone who wants to learn brazilian portuguese and enjoy our culture !
- Ok, this is all folks ! Bye bye.

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- First post in english
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- Hello everyone, i write in english for the first time here in polyglot club.
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- Hello everyone~~, i~~! This is my first time writeing in eEnglish ~~for~~on the ~~first time here in p~~Polyglot cClub site.
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- Hello, everyone~~, i write in english for the~~. This is my first time writing here ion pPolyglot club.
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- I always write in french , because this is the language which i really love.
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- I ~~always~~usually write in fFrench , because ~~this is~~I love theat language ~~which i really~~.¶(OR)¶I often write in French because I love it.
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- I ~~always~~usually write in french ~~, because this is the~~since it's a language ~~which i~~I really love.
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- My english is understable , i guess.
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- My eEnglish is ~~understa~~comprehensible , iI guess.
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- But i want to improve it more and more.
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- But iI want to ~~improve it more and more~~continue improving it.
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- I read and listen a lot in english, then this make it easier than if i don't read and listen nothing at all.
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- I read ~~and listen~~ a lot ~~in e~~of English~~, then this make it easier than if i don't read and listen nothing~~ and listen to it as well; it is easier to learn that way than not reading or listening to it at all.
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- I ~~read and listen a lot~~listen to and read a lot of material in eEnglish~~, then this make it easier than if i don't read and listen~~. Doing so is much better than doing nothing at all.
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- I make some stupid mistakes, the basic ones, because i not practise.Well.. i here because this.
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- I ~~make som~~sometimes make stupid mistakes~~, the basic ones,~~ because ~~i no~~I don't practi~~se.Well.. i here because this~~ce. That is why I am here.
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- I make ~~some~~a lot of stupid mistakes~~, the~~ on basic ~~ones,~~grammar because ~~i no~~I don't practi~~se.Well.. i here because this~~ce; this is why I'm here.
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- I'm almost forget this : i'm brazilian and i can help anyone who wants to learn brazilian portuguese and enjoy our culture !
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- I'm almost forg~~et this~~ ot: iI'm bBrazilian and iI can help anyone who wants to learn bBrazilian pPortuguese and enjoy our culture !
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- I'm almost forg~~et this : i~~ot to mention that I'm bBrazilian and iI can help anyone who wants to learn bBrazilian pPortuguese and ~~enjoy~~who wants to learn about our culture !
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- Ok, this is all folks ! Bye bye.
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- Ok, th~~is i~~at's all folks ! Bye bye. ¶
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