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    • Greetings Jo, yesterday I went to the stadium to watch a soccer game with my father and my brother, we waited for this game for the whole year, which was amazing and lasted for ninety minutes.
    • We stayed there for around two hours because everything was so fantastic, people, the game, the festival, the music, and mostly the food.

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    • Greetings Jo, yesterday I went to the stadium to watch a soccer game with my father and my brother, we waited for this game for the whole year, which was amazing and lasted for ninety minutes.
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      Y      esterday I went to the stadium to watch a soccer game with my father and my brother, we waiteda game for twhis game for the whole year, which was amazing andch we'd waited for an entire year to watch, an amazing game that lasted for ninety minutes.
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    • We stayed there for around two hours because everything was so fantastic, people, the game, the festival, the music, and mostly the food.
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    • We stayed therat the game site for around two hours because everything was so fantastic,: the people, the game, the festival, the music, andbut mostly the food.
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    • We stayed there for around two hours because everything was so fantastic, the people, the game, the festival, the music, and mostly the food.
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