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Scriptum ab Asishi - English

  • A story

    • Once upon time.
    • There were two close friend.
    • Their name were Samyar and Artin.
    • They always been together and love eachother like brothers.
    • One day they decided make gift boxes for each other.
    • They promised each other don’t open them until Christmas and put the boxes where no one can find them.finaly they made beautiful gift boxes and put somethings inside them.
    • In Saturday they met together and gave each other the boxes.
    • They both were really happy and curious because wanted know what there are in them .Both of them tried not to break their promise.after an hour that they spent together decide back home.
    • Sambar when arrived home went to his room and hide the red gift box under the bed and when Artin back home went his room and some seconds roam in his room and decide hid his green gift box in the drawer.samyar recline on his bed and was thinking himself about his gift :what are things in box?
    • Umm, maybe chip chocolate or maybe a red race car.
    • Samyar very loved open his box beacuse his had been curious.after some second he thought with himself: maybe Artin have been being curious like me and open his gift box.
    • Samyar went and brought his gift box and open it.
    • In his gift box there were two chip lolipopes and a photo from Samyar and Artin , that Artin had written on it love you Samyar, a red balloon and a tiny brown bear, after he saw inside of the box put the door of the box on it and hid it again.
    • Samyar all the night thought with himself Maybe Artin had opened his box like me.
    • But Artin didn’t this work.
    • Tomorrow morning Samyar went to met Artin and told him all of story, Artin some munits thought with himself and said to Samyar: this time no problem and I forgive you but when you promise don’t break it Samyar said: I’ll try.
    • they hug each other and went out to play.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English