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- I want to make friends more!!!
Hi there!
- I’m from Vietnam, you can call me Bang, I’m learning English, so I need to practice English every day.
- If anyone wants to help me, please can contact me. Thanks

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- I want to make friends more!!!
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- I want to make more friends ~~more~~!!!
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- Hi there!
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- I’m from Vietnam, you can call me Bang, I’m learning English, so I need to practice English every day.
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- I’m from Vietnam, you can call me Bang,. I’m learning English, so I need to practice English every day.
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- If anyone wants to help me, please can contact me. Thanks
  Vote now!
- If anyone wants to help me, please can contact me. Thanks.
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- If anyone wants to help me, ~~please~~can they get in touch with me? Thanks! (or/and) If anyone wants to help me, they can contact me.; Thanks.
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- If anyone wants to help me, please ~~can~~ contact me. Thanks!
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