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    • My_term of enlistment

    • HI, MY Name is Mohamed Almasry I finally graduated from my college, after six years, Now I’m 25 years old, and I tried to find a job or travel to a good country to work there, But The surprise is I can’t work or Travell before finishing the term of enlistment, I was very angry for this but after long thinking, I decided to go to the army quickly, and finish the term of enlistment fast until making everything I want, I prepare every this I will need and go to the police station to submit the papers to the police officer, He said to me, Go to cut your hair and come back on Saturday Morning, Now I will go to the paper to cut my hair, and I will go back to the police station to do what is required, I will go to the army for one year it’s a long time for me but this is my fate, I planned to practice my English language in the Army but I hope to do it, and finally, I hope to be the person what I wish for.

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    • HI, MY Name is Mohamed Almasry I finally graduated from my college, after six years, Now I’m 25 years old, and I tried to find a job or travel to a good country to work there, But The surprise is I can’t work or Travell before finishing the term of enlistment, I was very angry for this but after long thinking, I decided to go to the army quickly, and finish the term of enlistment fast until making everything I want, I prepare every this I will need and go to the police station to submit the papers to the police officer, He said to me, Go to cut your hair and come back on Saturday Morning, Now I will go to the paper to cut my hair, and I will go back to the police station to do what is required, I will go to the army for one year it’s a long time for me but this is my fate, I planned to practice my English language in the Army but I hope to do it, and finally, I hope to be the person what I wish for.
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    • HI, MY Name is Mohamed Almasry¶
      I finally graduated from my college, after six years, Now I’m 25 years old, and I tried to find a job or travel to a good country to work there, But The surprise is I can’t work or Travell before finishing the term of enlistment, I was very angry for this but after long thinking, I decided to go to the army quickly      , and finish the term of enlistment fast until making everything I want, I prepare every this I will need and go to the police station to submit the papers to the police officer, He said to me, Go to cut your hair and come back on Saturday Morning, Now I will go to the paper to cut my hair, and I will go back to the police station to do what is required, I will go to the army for one year it’s a long time for me but this is my fate, I planned to practice my English language in the Army but I hope to do it, and finally, I hope to be the person what I wish for.
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