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    • The two pie charts describe how different volunteers by organizations percentagewise in the years 2008 and 2014.
    • Overall, at the beginning of the period educational was the largest segment while health care made up the least part of the chart.
    • In comparison, at the end of the period environmental contributed the most de of valenteers by organizations while health care remaited in her position as at the beginning of the period.
    • Educational volenteers which comprised almost a quarter in 2008, fell to 17% in 2014.
    • In 2008, people was voluntered in art and others were at 18% and 15%, respectively, and both decreased by 6% after 14 year.
    • Sports proportion was 15% in 2008 and had à slight growth of 10% in 2014.
    • At the beginning of the period, volunteers by organizations in environmental made up 31% and this figure rose to 29% in 2014.
    • In contrast, contribution from health care have à little comprised of 1% in 2014 when was at 7% in 2008.

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    • The two pie charts describe how different volunteers by organizations percentagewise in the years 2008 and 2014.
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    • The two pie charts describe how different volunteers by organizations percentagewisecompare the number of volunteers to total members in the years 2008 and 2014.
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    • The two pie charts describe how different volunteers by organizations compare percentage-wise in the years 2008 and 2014.
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    • Overall, at the beginning of the period educational was the largest segment while health care made up the least part of the chart.
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    • Overall, at the beginning of the period, educational was the largest segment while health care made up the least part of the chart.
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    • Overall, at the beginning of the period educational was the largest segment while health care made upconsisted of the least part of the chart.
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    • In comparison, at the end of the period environmental contributed the most de of valenteers by organizations while health care remaited in her position as at the beginning of the period.
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    • In comparison, at the end of the period environmental activists contributed the most de of valeof the volunteers byto organizations while health care remaitned in ther same position as at the beginning of the period.
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    • In comparison, at the end of the period, environmental contributed the most de of valevolunteers by organizations while health care remaited in her positionned as at the beginning of the period.
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    • In 2008, people was voluntered in art and others were at 18% and 15%, respectively, and both decreased by 6% after 14 year.
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    • In 2008, people was voluntered in art and others were at 18% and 15%, respectively, and both decreased by 6% after 14 year.s.
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    • In 2008, people washo volunteered in art and others were at 18% and 15%, respectively, and both decreased by 6% after 14 years.
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    • At the beginning of the period, volunteers by organizations in environmental made up 31% and this figure rose to 29% in 2014.
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    • At the beginning of the period, volunteers by organizations in environmental activities made up 31% and this figure rose to 29% in 2014.
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    • At the beginning of the period, volunteers by organizations in for the environmental made up 31% and this figure rosefell slightly to 29% in 2014.
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    • In contrast, contribution from health care have à little comprised of 1% in 2014 when was at 7% in 2008.
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    • In contrast, contributions from health care have à little comprised offallen to 1% in 2014 when was atfrom 7% in 2008.
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    • In contrast, the contribution from health care have à little comprised of 1% in 2014 when was at 7fell from 7% in 2008 to only 1% in 200814.
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