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    • Pie chart

    • The two pie charts describe how different volunteers by organizations percentagewise in the year 2008 and 2014.
  • Overall, at the beginning of the period educational kind was the largest segment while health care made up the least part of the chart.
    • In comparison, , at the end of the period environmental contributed the most percentage of volenteers while health care remaited in her position as in the beginning of the period.
    • Educational volenteers which comprised almost a quarter in 2008, fell to 17% in 2014.
    • In 2008, poeople were voluntered in art and others were at 18% and 15% ,respectively, and both decreased by 6% after 14 year.
    • Sport proportion was 15% in 2008 and had à slight growth if 10% in 2014.
  • At the beginning of the period, volunteers by organizations in environmental kind made up 21% and this figure rose to 29% in 2014.
    • In contrast, contribution from health care have a little comprised of 1% in 2014 when was at 7% in 2008.

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