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My family
I have two brothers and five sisters.
- I am middle one .
My old brother died ten years ago and my younger brothers studied in the university.
- Also my old sister has two daughter and son.
- All my sister get married accept younger one.
- She is a single.
- My dad lost 12 years ago.
- And my mother don t married.
- Afer him until now.
- She is fifty years old age.
- My family meets every frieday to eat the lunch and sit down togather afternoon.we. always share with happy and miserable.
- We really a happy family.

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- I have two brothers and five sisters.
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- I am middle one .
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- I am the middle ~~one~~ child.
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- My old brother died ten years ago and my younger brothers studied in the university.
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- Also my old sister has two daughter and son.
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- Also my older sister has two daughter and a son.
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- Also my older sister has two daughters and a son.
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- All my sister get married accept younger one.
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- All my sisters geot married accept the younger one.
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- All my sisters geot married acexcept the youngerst one.
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- She is a single.
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- She is a single.
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- My dad lost 12 years ago.
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- And my mother don t married.
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- And my mother d~~on t~~ idn’t remarr~~ied~~y.
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- Afer him until now.
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- She is fifty years old age.
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- My family meets every frieday to eat the lunch and sit down togather afternoon.we. always share with happy and miserable.
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- My family meets every fFrieday afternoon to eat the lunch and sit down togaether ~~afternoon.we.~~. We always share ~~with~~our stories, happy and miserable.
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- My family meets every fFrieday to eat ~~the~~ lunch and sits down togaether after~~noon.we. always share with~~wards to share happy and miserable. times
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- We really a happy family.
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- We are a really a happy family.
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My family

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