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  • Passion

    • Is it a vital thing or can human beings live without it ?
    • For me passion is the key to unleash your creativity; furthermore, it assists me for creating a fascinating version of myself.
    • People who lose their passion they are in hell, definitely they feel hectic, they can’t keep up their life.
    • How people lose their passion?
    • May be the stress of life make them lose it they can’t go on, may be losing somebody who literally means a lot to them, therfore they feel the spark is off, they can’t accept that reality ever.
    • You know we are literally weak a tiny thing can destroy us even damage us for the rest of our life nevertheless we need to be strong lots of people depend upon us, deal with you as a role model moreover every human beings has a massage need to deliver in a nobel manner.
    • Everybody obtains obstacles but the strongest one who can turn it into a bless...

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    • For me passion is the key to unleash your creativity; furthermore, it assists me for creating a fascinating version of myself.
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    • For me, passion is the key to unleash youring my creativity; furthermore, it assists me forwith creating a fascinating version of myself.
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    • People who lose their passion they are in hell, definitely they feel hectic, they can’t keep up their life.
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    • People who lose their passion they are in hell,are suffering, they definitely they feel hectic, and they can’t keep up with their life.
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    • May be the stress of life make them lose it they can’t go on, may be losing somebody who literally means a lot to them, therfore they feel the spark is off, they can’t accept that reality ever.
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    • May be the stress of life makes them lose it and they can’t go on, may b. Maybe they are losing somebody who literally means a lot to them,; therefore they feel the spark is off, and they can’t accept that reality ever.
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    • You know we are literally weak a tiny thing can destroy us even damage us for the rest of our life nevertheless we need to be strong lots of people depend upon us, deal with you as a role model moreover every human beings has a massage need to deliver in a nobel manner.
      투표하세요!
    • You know we are literally weak a. A tiny thing can destroy us, even damage us for the rest of our life n. Nevertheless, we need to be strong l. Lots of people depend upon us, deal with you and see us as a role model m. Moreover, every human beings has a maessage that needs to be delivered in a nobele manner.
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