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    • I am excited to apply for the Part Time Retail Sales Associate position at Kitchen.
    • I believe that my passion for food and skill make me an ideal candidate for the job.
    • I was born and grow up in China.
    • I got my bachelor’s degree in law and then I worked in a law firm in Shenzhen city.
    • I worked as a government legal adviser and my main job is to review government administrative penalty files.
    • I saw there are some stresses between public power and individual rights.
    • I hope to find a balance between these two, so I quit my job and went to XX University to learn International and European Human Rights law.
    • I got my master’s degree at XX University.
    • The reasons why I think I am a good match for this job are as follows:  I have a genuine passion for cooking Even if I did not major in cooking, cooking is always a vital part of my life.
    • I grow up in a family which is willing to spend lots of time and energy on food, food is not only something for us to survive but more importantly, the emotional connection for people.
    • I went to the Netherlands at the age of 24, that was my first time being abroad alone and to be honest, life was not always easy.
    • Every time I felt homesick or depressed, I would go to the kitchen and make a dish for myself, food cured me.
    •  I have good communication skills I care about people and having lived on three different continents, I truly embrace the diversity of people and cultures.
  • I am open-minded and enjoy communicating with people across language and cultural barriers.
    • In this respect, maybe my self-evaluation can be subjective.
  • Here is a screenshot of feedback I received yesterday written by one of my teachers this semester.
  • I hope it provides a different perspective.
    •  I am eager to learn For me, study is a lifestyle.
    • A new study adventure at Kitchen must be exciting.

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