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    • brithday party for my new friend

    • Dear Mr and Mrs Jackson I hope this emaill finds you well.
    • I’m ..Xyz and I have made friend with your daughter and we get on well with each other.I met your sweatheart Anna when she steped on my class first time.she sat next to me and this way we made friends.
    • We all know that your daughter’s, my friend’s, birthday is coming soon so we must prepare a brithday party.I’m going to make a special cake ,because I love baking and I won first place in an international competition about wedding cake ,which I have only sixty minutes My best friend Susie is going to decorate for her party room in your house if you allow?
    • Another ours friends is going to make a glitters decoration to party room?
    • You being her parents can you help us for example that.
  • you spend time with her in order to she won’t find out about suprise brithady party.
  • You can take her to our favourite pizzeria or go bowling in local city where is close Town hall Taking part in this clebration is especially important to me, because we still are meeting Anna’s personality and We want to celebrate with her brithday.Of course you are invited too.
  • I hope you’ll be coming to this brithday party . Sirencly Xyz

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    • I’m ..Xyz and I have made friend with your daughter and we get on well with each other.I met your sweatheart Anna when she steped on my class first time.she sat next to me and this way we made friends.
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    • I’m ..Xyz and I have made friends with your daughter and we get on well with each other. I met your sweatheart Anna when she stepped inton my class for the first time.s She sat next to me and in this way we madbecame friends.
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    • We all know that your daughter’s, my friend’s, birthday is coming soon so we must prepare a brithday party.I’m going to make a special cake ,because I love baking and I won first place in an international competition about wedding cake ,which I have only sixty minutes My best friend Susie is going to decorate for her party room in your house if you allow?
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    • We all know that your daughter’s, and my friend’s, birthday iss are coming soon so we must prepare a brirthday party. I’m going to make a special cake ,because I love baking and I won first place in an international competition aboutto make a wedding cake ,which I havein only sixty minutes
      My best friend Susie is going to decorate for her party room in your house if you allow      .¶
      Would I be able to ask you for a favour? Could my best friend Susie decorate a room in your house for Anna's birthday party      ?
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    • You can take her to our favourite pizzeria or go bowling in local city where is close Town hall Taking part in this clebration is especially important to me, because we still are meeting Anna’s personality and We want to celebrate with her brithday.Of course you are invited too.
      Vote now!
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