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    • Danish study: risks of myocarditis After vaccination with (Moderna) shot are higher than with Pfizer The probability of developing myocarditis- which is a quite rare side effect- after receiving the Moderna shot exceeds at a rate four times than using the Pfizer-BioNTech COVID-19 Vaccine. a Danish study was published in the British Medical Journal(The BMJ) on Thursday.
    • The study included about %85 of Danes representing approximately 4.9 of the Danish population aged 12 or older, focused on messenger RNA (mRNA) technology-based vaccinations.
    • In this regard, the principal investigator Anders Hviid stated that the findings we reached didn’t generally overshadow the many benefits of the vaccination, he added also that One must keep in mind that the alternative of getting an infection with COVID-19 probably also involves a risk of inflammation in the heart muscle.

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    • Danish study: risks of myocarditis After vaccination with (Moderna) shot are higher than with Pfizer The probability of developing myocarditis- which is a quite rare side effect- after receiving the Moderna shot exceeds at a rate four times than using the Pfizer-BioNTech COVID-19 Vaccine. a Danish study was published in the British Medical Journal(The BMJ) on Thursday.
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    • According to a Danish study:, the risks of myocarditis Afterfollowing vaccination with (Moderna) shot are higher than with Pfizer¶
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      - which is a quite rare side effect - after receiving the Moderna shot exceeds at a rate four times thais 4 times greater than when using the Pfizer-BioNTech COVID-19 Vaccine., a Danish study was published on Thursday in the British Medical Journal (The BMJ) on Thursdayhas stated.
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    • The study included about %85 of Danes representing approximately 4.9 of the Danish population aged 12 or older, focused on messenger RNA (mRNA) technology-based vaccinations.
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    • The study included about %85% of Danes representing approximately 4.9 million of the Danish population aged 12 or older,ver and focused on messenger RNA (mRNA) technology-based vaccinations.
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    • In this regard, the principal investigator Anders Hviid stated that the findings we reached didn’t generally overshadow the many benefits of the vaccination, he added also that One must keep in mind that the alternative of getting an infection with COVID-19 probably also involves a risk of inflammation in the heart muscle.
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    • In this regard, the principal investigator Anders Hviid stated that the findings we reached didn’did not generally overshadow the many benefits of the vaccination, h. He added also that One must keep in mind that the alternative of gettbeing an infectioned with COVID-19 probably also involves a risk of inflammation in the heart muscle. ¶
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