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    • Introduction for personal statement (french pharmacy student)

    • During my pharmaceutical studies (or As I progressed in my pharmacy studies?), I became more and more aware of the complexity of Health Policy surrounding pharmaceutical products, and how difficult it is to set a price on health.
    • The question of ethics and equal access to care also arises, intra-country based on income and inter-country based on the country’s investment in health and therefore its level of development (I dont know how to say my last sentence in english sorry).
    • Reports of supply shortages for major therapeutic interest drugs in France and internationally have reached new heights in recent months.
    • While we have good reasons to hope that the worst of the covid-19 pandemic is now behind us, events such as the war in Ukraine and the energetic crisis lead to global economic turbulence and continue to demonstrate the vulnerability of health systems.
    • Inflation lead to higher costs for energy, raw materials and transport.
    • Combined with budgetary constraints and strictly (or highly?) controlled price in several countries, makes it difficult for manufacturers.
    • Especially of generic drugs, making some medicines at a loss or favoring countries where the price is higher.
  • I want to devote myself to guaranteeing access and availability of medicines even in times of crisis, because tomorrow’s world will be challenging.
    • Indeed, in addition to this, there is the climate constraint, given that the health sector will also have to do its own part to move towards a more sustainable (or responsible?) world.
    • Through the X Master’s at the X, I wish to get the academic knowledge that I need for the future to improve access to health care for all.
    • My aim is to ensure that patients can have access to their treatments, quickly, in a continue way, and at the optimal price.
    • I want to learn how health systems can be designed and implemented to work towards accessible and equitable health care, making an impact in the lives of patients all around the globe.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Frazo 1
    • During my pharmaceutical studies (or As I progressed in my pharmacy studies?), I became more and more aware of the complexity of Health Policy surrounding pharmaceutical products, and how difficult it is to set a price on health.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • DuringOver the course of my pharmaceutical studies (or As I have progressed in my pharmacy studies?)*, I have became more and more aware of the complexity of Health Policy surrounding pharmaceutical products, and how difficult it is to set a price on healthcare.
    • During my pharmaceutical studies (or As I progressed in my pharmacy studies?), I, I have becaome more and more aware of the complexity of Health Policy surrounding pharmaceutical products, and how difficult it is to set a price on health.
    • During my pharmaceutical studies (or As I progressed in my pharmacy studies?), I became more and more, I have gained awareness of the complexity of Hhealth Ppolicy surrounding pharmaceutical products, and how difficult it is to set a price on health.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • The question of ethics and equal access to care also arises, intra-country based on income and inter-country based on the country’s investment in health and therefore its level of development (I dont know how to say my last sentence in english sorry).
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The question of ethics and equal access to care also arises, intra-country based on income and inter-country based on the country’s investment in healthcare and therefore its level of development (I dont know how to say my last sentence in english sorry).
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • Reports of supply shortages for major therapeutic interest drugs in France and internationally have reached new heights in recent months.
      100% GOOD (2 votes)
    • Reports of supply shortages for major therapeutic interest drugs in France and internationally other countries have reached new heights in recent months.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • While we have good reasons to hope that the worst of the covid-19 pandemic is now behind us, events such as the war in Ukraine and the energetic crisis lead to global economic turbulence and continue to demonstrate the vulnerability of health systems.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • While we have good reasons to hope that the worst of the cCovid-19 pandemic is now behind us, events such as the war in Ukraine and the energeticy crisis have lead to global economic turbulence and continue to demonstrate the vulnerability of healthcare systems.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • Combined with budgetary constraints and strictly (or highly?) controlled price in several countries, makes it difficult for manufacturers.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Combined withIn addition, budgetary constraints and strictly (or highly?) controlled prices in several countries, makes it difficult for manufacturers (to do what?).
    • Combined with bBudgetary constraints and strictly (or highly?) -controlled prices in several countries, makes it difficult for manufacturers to meet consumer demand.
    • Combineding all this with budgetary constraints and strictly (or highly?) controlled prices in several countries, makes it difficult for manufacturers.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • Especially of generic drugs, making some medicines at a loss or favoring countries where the price is higher.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Especially in the case of generic drugs, makingnufacturers make some medicines at a loss or favoring countries where the price is higher.
    • EThis is especially oftrue for generic drugs, making some medicinessome of which manufacturers produce at a loss or favoringproduce for countries where the price is higher.
    • EThis especially applies tof generic drugs, makeaning that some medicines are manufactured at a loss or favoringother countries are favored for production where the price is higher.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • I want to devote myself to guaranteeing access and availability of medicines even in times of crisis, because tomorrow’s world will be challenging.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • Indeed, in addition to this, there is the climate constraint, given that the health sector will also have to do its own part to move towards a more sustainable (or responsible?) world.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Indeed, in addition to this, there is the climate constraintfactor of climate change, given that the health sector will also have to do its own part to move towards a more sustainable (or responsible?)* world.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • Through the X Master’s at the X, I wish to get the academic knowledge that I need for the future to improve access to health care for all.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Through the X Master’s at the X, I wish to get the academic knowledge that I need for the future to improve access to health care for all.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
  • Frazo 12
    • I want to learn how health systems can be designed and implemented to work towards accessible and equitable health care, making an impact in the lives of patients all around the globe.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • I want to learn how health systems can be designed and implemented to work towards accessible and equitable health care, making an impact ion the lives of patients all around the globe.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12