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  • My experience

    • Besides, I am interested in the international scene, I completed a one-year exchange program in Spain at the University of Valencia, with all courses taken in English.
    • I was able to learn about the teaching and practice of pharmaceutical sciences in Spain, as well as the Spanish health institutions and health care system, in a context of health crisis due to the Covid-19.
  • Moreover, I was the Vice-President of the International Relations Board of the Pharmacy Students’ Association in Reims, with the aim to promote international training.
    • Working in this association has allowed me to strengthen my team-work abilities and to develop great communication skills.
    • I also took communication courses at university helping me to be more comfortable speaking publicly.
    • During the 2017 summer, I volunteered in a Wild Animal Rescue Center in Ecuador for two months in.
    • I spent a few days in the Amazonian forest where I was able to see the lack of access to health care and medicines for the local population, the first doctor was several hours away by pirogue and too expensive for a population that lives on self-sufficiency.
    • I became aware of the inequality of access to healthcare.

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    • Besides, I am interested in the international scene, I completed a one-year exchange program in Spain at the University of Valencia, with all courses taken in English.
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    • Besidescause, I am interested in the international scene, I completed a one-year exchange program in Spain at the University of Valencia, with all courses taken in English.
    • Besides,Given that I am interested in the wider international sceneworld, I completed a one-year exchange program in Spain at the University of Valencia, with all courses taken in English.
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    • I was able to learn about the teaching and practice of pharmaceutical sciences in Spain, as well as the Spanish health institutions and health care system, in a context of health crisis due to the Covid-19.
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    • I was able to learn about the teaching and practice of pharmaceutical sciences in Spain, as well as the Spanish health institutions and its health care system, in athe context of a health crisis due to the Covid-19.
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    • Moreover, I was the Vice-President of the International Relations Board of the Pharmacy Students’ Association in Reims, with the aim to promote international training.
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    • I spent a few days in the Amazonian forest where I was able to see the lack of access to health care and medicines for the local population, the first doctor was several hours away by pirogue and too expensive for a population that lives on self-sufficiency.
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    • I spent a few days in the Amazonian forest where I was able to see the lack of access to health care and medicines for the local population, the first doctor wasbeing several hours away by pirogudugout canoe and too expensive for a population that lives on self-sufficiencysubsistent population.
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