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    • Today I went to my work when I was on the road I come cross with my child friend Hussein. he shocked me; he was in a dirty look with a sad look appeared on his face, firstly he didn’t recognize me I told him I am his best friend Muhammad from Aleppo, and made him remember our acts in the school when we were bothering the mathematic teacher, and made some noise in Arabic lesson, our friend used to call us as mother and father the mocking, today I felt sorry for him to saw him in this way, each of us had had dreams and goals eagerer to achieve them, but life was more powerful than us, now each one of us reach to the point he can’t retreat from it, we should accept ourselves as we are, we swear to struggle hard to continue our life peacefully and hopefully.

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    • Today I went to my work when I was on the road I come cross with my child friend Hussein. he shocked me; he was in a dirty look with a sad look appeared on his face, firstly he didn’t recognize me I told him I am his best friend Muhammad from Aleppo, and made him remember our acts in the school when we were bothering the mathematic teacher, and made some noise in Arabic lesson, our friend used to call us as mother and father the mocking, today I felt sorry for him to saw him in this way, each of us had had dreams and goals eagerer to achieve them, but life was more powerful than us, now each one of us reach to the point he can’t retreat from it, we should accept ourselves as we are, we swear to struggle hard to continue our life peacefully and hopefully.
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    • Today, I went to my work w. When I was on the road, I coame cross with my childhood friend Hussein. hHis appearance shocked me;: he was in a dirty look with a sad look appeared on his face,. At firstly, he didn’t recognize me, so I told him I amthat I was his best friend Muhammad from Aleppo, and. I made him remember our acts in the school, whilen we were bothering the mathematics teacher, and made some noise the noises we made during Arabic lesson, os. Our friends used to call us as mother and father the mocking, tly. Today, I felt sorry for him to sawee him in this way, each of us had. We both had dreams and goals, and we were eagerer to achieve them, - but life was, fate and God were more powerful than us, now each one of useither of us. Now that we have reach toed the point hin our lives from which we can’t retreat from it, we should accept ourselves as we are, we swear to struggle hard to continue our life peacefully and hopefully fate, swear to continue the struggle hard to success in peace and with hope of a brighter future.
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