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    • Today I went to my work when I was on the road I come cross with my child friend Hussein. he shocked me; he was in a dirty look with a sad look appeared on his face, firstly he didn’t recognize me I told him I am his best friend Muhammad from Aleppo, and made him remember our acts in the school when we were bothering the mathematic teacher, and made some noise in Arabic lesson, our friend used to call us as mother and father the mocking, today I felt sorry for him to saw him in this way, each of us had had dreams and goals eagerer to achieve them, but life was more powerful than us, now each one of us reach to the point he can’t retreat from it, we should accept ourselves as we are, we swear to struggle hard to continue our life peacefully and hopefully.

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    • Today I went to my work when I was on the road I come cross with my child friend Hussein. he shocked me; he was in a dirty look with a sad look appeared on his face, firstly he didn’t recognize me I told him I am his best friend Muhammad from Aleppo, and made him remember our acts in the school when we were bothering the mathematic teacher, and made some noise in Arabic lesson, our friend used to call us as mother and father the mocking, today I felt sorry for him to saw him in this way, each of us had had dreams and goals eagerer to achieve them, but life was more powerful than us, now each one of us reach to the point he can’t retreat from it, we should accept ourselves as we are, we swear to struggle hard to continue our life peacefully and hopefully.
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    • Today I went to my work when I was on the road I come across with my childhood friend Hussein. he shocked me; he was in a dirty look with a sad look appeared on his face, firstly he didn’t recognize me I told him I am his best friend Muhammad from Aleppo, and made him remember our acts in the school when we were bothering the mathematics teacher, and made some noise in Arabic lesson, our friend used to call us as mother and father the mocking, today I felt sorry for him to saw him in this way, each of us had had dreams and goals eagerer to achieve them, but life was more powerful than us, now each one of us reach to the point he can’t retreat from it, we should accept ourselves as we are, we swear to struggle hard to continue our life peacefully and hopefully.
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