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    • Listening Music While Doing Homework

    • My daughter is in grade 9 , I found her like listening music while doing homework at home.
    • I don’t think that’s a effective way for learning.
    • I asked her must concentrate doing one task.
    • She usually did everything slowly, and I said her behaviors like a sloths.
    • She have stayed at her room hours doing physics homework with headphones.
    • I criticize her strictly, her eyes tore.
    • I’m confused whether music with homework good or bad?

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