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Text from George-S-L - English

    • My First English Dairy

    • I have so many upset of life resently, not only I ,but almost everyone live in this area can’t say what they are suffering .
    • So, I have to write in English , to escape from the strict supervising and the wall .
    • This is my first English dairy, I’m so happy to find the site today .maybe in there , I can express what I see, feel and my plan for furture.
    • Forgive me , this dairy is an test, in my country if you write something ”they” don’t like, the words will missing in social media ,even the person will be treated as a criminal.
    • I have not familar with the circumstances outside the Wall.
    • Thank you for your watching and help , see you next day .

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English