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    • my experience yesterday

    • yesterday was very beautiful day for me.
    • there were our school friends gathering at akira party plot.we played lot of with each pther.we done the snacks.we talked too much about our old days.and current life situations.then we left for hom at 9.00 pm.

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    • there were our school friends gathering at akira party plot.we played lot of with each pther.we done the snacks.we talked too much about our old days.and current life situations.then we left for hom at 9.00 pm.
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    • t      There were our school friends gathering at akira party plot.w We played lot of with each pother.we done the We had snacks.w We talked too much about our old days. and current life situations.t Then we left for home at 9.00 pm.
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    • there were o       Our school friends were gathering at akira party plot.w We played a lot of/many games with each pother.we done theWe had snacks.w We talked too much about our old days.and current life situations.t, too. Then we left for home at 9.00 pm.
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    • t      There were our school friends gathering at athe Akira party plot.w We played a lot of with each pother.w we have done the snacks.w We talked too much about our old days.a And current life situations. then we left for home at 9.00 pm.
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