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    • Carrer plan essay

  • After completing my master’s study in the UK, I will return to Iraq and continue my career as a specialized radiology technician.
    • I share the experiences, knowledge and new skills I gained through my studies in the UK with my fellow young doctors, technologists and physicists from all over Iraq through my use of communication skills and the sharing of my scientific research At conferences and events and holding courses for staff and expanding the scope of a student training to include students of Basra College of Medicine to contribute to the graduation of doctors who have the knowledge, willingness and skill that enables them to practice medicine safely and to support and maintain health through medical education, to be more useful.
    • Five years after graduation I seek will use my connections as a Chevening researcher to gain a good reputation and help from my colleagues in the Chevening network.
    • In addition, for support and funding, I will work with the Department for International Development in Achieving the most important sustainable development goals, which is the third and fourth goal, which includes good health, well-being and quality education One of its most important outputs is to increase funding in the health sector and to employ, develop and train the workforce, as well as support research and development.
    • Ensuring that all learners acquire the knowledge and skills necessary to support sustainable development, build educational facilities, raise their level and prepare them to be an effective and safe educational environment.
    • In the next ten years after that, I aspire to continue my doctoral study to develop my capabilities to enrich the undergraduate curriculum.
    • Also, to launch successful pilot projects to establish an Iraqi private medical sector with modern and effective scientific expertise.
  • Therefore, I plan to establish several departments in the centre, each department specialized in a field, one for diagnostic medical imaging and one for imaging medical treatment and the other for the continuous follow-up of patients…etc., in addition to special training and development centre for staff, students and researchers.
  • This specialized centre will have branches in all Iraqi governorates.
  • Then we will contribute more to reducing the incidence and death of cancer and other diseases and renewing the activity of the Iraqi health sector.
  • Therefore, Studying in the UK will help me develop networks and get support from the Department for International Development to achieve my goal.
    • At this point, I will be We are in a much better position to use all the information that I will have gained from my educational and practical experiences to provide the required service needed by the community.
  • I will share my experience with the Chevening community to praise my experience of developing my country after my return to Iraq.

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    • After completing my master’s study in the UK, I will return to Iraq and continue my career as a specialized radiology technician.
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    • I share the experiences, knowledge and new skills I gained through my studies in the UK with my fellow young doctors, technologists and physicists from all over Iraq through my use of communication skills and the sharing of my scientific research At conferences and events and holding courses for staff and expanding the scope of a student training to include students of Basra College of Medicine to contribute to the graduation of doctors who have the knowledge, willingness and skill that enables them to practice medicine safely and to support and maintain health through medical education, to be more useful.
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    • I share the experiences, knowledge and new skills I gained through my studies in the UK with my fellow young doctors, technologists and physicists from all over Iraq. I do this through my use of communication skills and the sharing of my scientific research Aat conferences and, events and holding courses for staff and. Also, I expanding the scope of a student training to include students of Basra College of Medicine to contribute to the graduation of doctors who have the knowledge, willingness and skill that enables them to practice medicine safely and to support and maintain health through medical education, to be more useful.
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    • Five years after graduation I seek will use my connections as a Chevening researcher to gain a good reputation and help from my colleagues in the Chevening network.
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    • Five years after graduation I seek will use my connections as a Chevening researcher to gain a good reputation and receive help from my colleagues in the Chevening network.
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    • In addition, for support and funding, I will work with the Department for International Development in Achieving the most important sustainable development goals, which is the third and fourth goal, which includes good health, well-being and quality education One of its most important outputs is to increase funding in the health sector and to employ, develop and train the workforce, as well as support research and development.
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    • In addition, for support and funding, I will work with the Department for International Development in Aachieving the most important sustainable development goals, which is the third and fourth goal, which includesing good health, well-being and quality education . One of its most important outputs is to increase funding in the health sector and to employ, develop and train the workforce, as well as support research and development.,
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    • Ensuring that all learners acquire the knowledge and skills necessary to support sustainable development, build educational facilities, raise their level and prepare them to be an effective and safe educational environment.
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    • Eensuring that all learners acquire the knowledge and skills necessary to support sustainable development, build educational facilities, raise their level and prepare them to be an effective and safe educational environment.
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    • In the next ten years after that, I aspire to continue my doctoral study to develop my capabilities to enrich the undergraduate curriculum.
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    • In the next ten years after that, I aspire to continue my doctoral study to develop my capabilities to enrich the undergraduate curriculum.
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    • Also, to launch successful pilot projects to establish an Iraqi private medical sector with modern and effective scientific expertise.
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    • Also, I aspire to launch successful pilot projects to establish an Iraqi private medical sector with modern and effective scientific expertise.
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    • Therefore, I plan to establish several departments in the centre, each department specialized in a field, one for diagnostic medical imaging and one for imaging medical treatment and the other for the continuous follow-up of patients…etc., in addition to special training and development centre for staff, students and researchers.
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    • Then we will contribute more to reducing the incidence and death of cancer and other diseases and renewing the activity of the Iraqi health sector.
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    • Therefore, Studying in the UK will help me develop networks and get support from the Department for International Development to achieve my goal.
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    • At this point, I will be We are in a much better position to use all the information that I will have gained from my educational and practical experiences to provide the required service needed by the community.
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    • At this point, I will be We are in a much better position to use all the information that I will have gained from my educational and practical experiences to provide the required service needed by the community.
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