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    • how to conquer a girl expleined with my own words

    • This is an extensive topic more than you thing so I’m going to talk about just the main and important ideas of this.
    • To be chase by a girl we must to have the mentality of abundance(with abundance mentality we are not going to be afraid of taking risks or have a normal behaivor I mean you are not going to be holding back your emotions ), power, masculinity, no scarcity mentality , confidence , a good phisical contact , being focused on our goals and have a clear vision who we want to be. with all the things I’ve mensionated before women will see you atractive nevertheless we have to make the second step that is give them clues to show them that we have interst in her , to give them these clues with have to be specia and the best way is telling them things about their appearance what they do and why they do make them special , what they say and why it makes her special , what both have in commun and fanally if the girl is too beatiful we should say a defect of her in a way of jocking our personality would be fan and kind of egocentric.
    • All of above could be resume with this 2 questions to ourself .
    • How does a winer behave? and how do I make her conquer me beacuse I am the prize?

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    • To be chase by a girl we must to have the mentality of abundance(with abundance mentality we are not going to be afraid of taking risks or have a normal behaivor I mean you are not going to be holding back your emotions ), power, masculinity, no scarcity mentality , confidence , a good phisical contact , being focused on our goals and have a clear vision who we want to be. with all the things I’ve mensionated before women will see you atractive nevertheless we have to make the second step that is give them clues to show them that we have interst in her , to give them these clues with have to be specia and the best way is telling them things about their appearance what they do and why they do make them special , what they say and why it makes her special , what both have in commun and fanally if the girl is too beatiful we should say a defect of her in a way of jocking our personality would be fan and kind of egocentric.
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    • To be chased by a girl we must to have the mentality of abundance(with an abundance mentality we are not going to be afraid of taking risks or have a normal behaivior I mean you are not going to be holding back your emotions ), power, masculinity, no scarcity mentality , confidence , a good phiysical contact , being focused on our goals and have a clear vision who we want to be. with all the things I’ve menstionated before women will see you attractive nevertheless, we have to make the second step that iswhich is to give them clues to show them that we have an interest in her , to give them these clues with have to be speciafic and the best way is telling them things about their appearance what they do and why they do make them special , what they say and why it makes her special , what both have in commuon and fainally, if the girl is too beautiful we should say a defect of her in a way of jocking our personality would be fan and kind of egocentric.
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