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Tekstong galing sa Daria1503 - English

    • My first text for correct

  • Hello everybody!
    • This is my kind of coming out of comfort zone.
    • I want to practice in writing.
    • So you are welcome for some constructive critic.
    • Let me tell you about the last book I have read.
    • It was Eleanor Porter ”Pollyanna”.
    • I highly recommend you to read it if you haven’t.
    • A few words about plot: little orphan Pollyanna comes to live with her uncle Polly after her father death.
    • So the little girl was left alone and only Ladies Aids took care about her.
    • So Pollyanna was too excited to live with her own ”folks”.
    • But her uncle Polly wasn’t so glad about child presence in her house...
    • The story tells us how one little girl with sincere heart can bring gladness to everyone.
    • Her ”glad game” helped almost everyone in Beldingsville to notice everyday happiness in their routine.
    • But sudden accident almost ruined Pollyanna’s ability to be glad for everything...
    • It was my first experience to read in English.
  • Some archaic words were difficult to understand, but in general it was fun.
    • This story helped me to notice a lot of things I am glad for.
    • I hope that this kind and joyful story will make you grateful for everything you already have!
    • Enjoy reading.

Pakiusap, tumulong sa pagtatama sa mga pangungusap! - English