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    • sure, I am currently just studying English in the evenings and working weekends in a restaurant as a delivery driver .
    • I was born in Cali however grew up in Pereira and I am currently living here in Pereira since I was 5 years I graduated from high school in 2015 and have been studying and working since then.
    • ,I live with my parents and my two brothers, my mother works as a hairdresser and my father as a welder, my yunger brother is studying mathematics and the older one is is working as a receptionist in a hotel.
    • I like to go jogging and play soccer and go out with my friends and dance, I love English since I was a child because I’v e always wanted to travel around the world and know their cultures, I watch all the series and movies in English and I like to listeng to music in English and that’s my resume

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    • sure, I am currently just studying English in the evenings and working weekends in a restaurant as a delivery driver .
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    • sSure, I am currently just studying English in the evenings and working weekends in a restaurant as a delivery driver .
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    • sure, I am currently just studying English in the evenings and working weekends in a restaurant as a delivery driver .
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    • I was born in Cali however grew up in Pereira and I am currently living here in Pereira since I was 5 years I graduated from high school in 2015 and have been studying and working since then.
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    • I was born in Cali h. However I grew up in Pereira and I am currently've been living here in Pereira since I was 5 years old. I graduated from high school in 2015 and have been studying and working since then.
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    • I was born in Cali however but grew up in Pereira and I am currently living here in Pereira since I was 5 years I graduated from high school in 2015 and have been studying and working since then.
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    • ,I live with my parents and my two brothers, my mother works as a hairdresser and my father as a welder, my yunger brother is studying mathematics and the older one is is working as a receptionist in a hotel.
      투표하세요!
    • ,I live with my parents and my two brothers,. mMy mother works as a hairdresser and my father as a welder, m. My younger brother is studying mathematics and the older one is is working as a receptionist in a hotel.
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    • ,I live with my parents and my two brothers, my mother works as a hairdresser and my father as a welder, my younger brother is studying mathematics and the older one is is working as a receptionist in a hotel.
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    • I like to go jogging and play soccer and go out with my friends and dance, I love English since I was a child because I’v e always wanted to travel around the world and know their cultures, I watch all the series and movies in English and I like to listeng to music in English and that’s my resume
      투표하세요!
    • I like to go jogging and, play soccer and go out with my friends and dance,. I've loved English since I was a child because I’v e always wanted to travel around the world and know theirits cultures,. I watch all the series and movies in English and I like to listening to music in English and that’s my resume.
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    • I like to go jogging and play soccer and go out with my friends and dance, I love English since I was a child because I’v e always wanted to travel around the world and know their cultures, I watch all the series and movies in English and I like to listening to music in English and that’s my resume
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