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    • how do I see myself in five years

    • I’m someone who loves learning about new things so in the next five years, I see myself as having established strong knowledge in a lot of things like bussines, sellings, another lenguages, I would also like to have my own business and have income from several different sources to have financial freedom, I see myself like a wise man who is good at talking with people also I would like to be good at dancing, playing soccer

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    • I’m someone who loves learning about new things so in the next five years, I see myself as having established strong knowledge in a lot of things like bussines, sellings, another lenguages, I would also like to have my own business and have income from several different sources to have financial freedom, I see myself like a wise man who is good at talking with people also I would like to be good at dancing, playing soccer
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    • I’m someone who loves learning about new things so in the next five years, I see myself as having established strong knowledge in a lot of things like bussiness, sellingales, and other leanguages,. I would also like to have my own business and have income from several different sources to have financial freedom,. I see myself likeas a wise man who is good at talking with people also I would like to be good at dancing, playing soccer
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    • I’m someone who loves learning about new things, so in the next five years, I see myself as having established strong knowledge in a lot of things likereas such as bussiness, sellingales, and other leanguages,. I would also like to haveown my own business and have income from several different sources to have financial freedom,. I see myself likeas a wise man who is good at talking with people also. For fun, I would also like to become good at dancing, and playing soccer.
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    • I’m someone who loves learning about new things so in the next five years, I see myself as having established strong knowledge in a lot of things like bussiness, sellings, and other leanguages, I would also like to have my own business and have income from several different sources to have financial freedom, I see myself like a wise man who is good at talking with people also I would like to be good at dancing, playing soccer
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