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    • Drugs danger

    • Drugs has various negative impacts on the addicts whether it is long or short term ones and these affects negatively almost all the body’s organs.
    • To start with , drugs increase the prospect of infection of diseases that transmits through the blood .
    • Additionally , this poison damages the brain which leads to both nervous attacks and mental disorders ,and also weakens the memory and the ability to attention .
    • Furthermore , drugs consumption causes heart diseases and hypertension.
    • Moreover , it heightens the pressure on the liver which may leads to cirrhosis of the liver .
    • Ultimately, drugs hurts the stomach and causes problems in the appetite which in turn leads to losing weight.

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    • Drugs has various negative impacts on the addicts whether it is long or short term ones and these affects negatively almost all the body’s organs.
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    • Drugs has various negative impacts on the addicts whether it is ich can be either long or short term ones and these affects. These negatively affect almost all the body’s organs.
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    • Drugs has various negative impacts on the addicts whether it is long or short term ones and these affecan HAVE a variety of short and/or long term negative impacts on users that adversely impacts negatively almost allarly all of the body’s organs.
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    • Additionally , this poison damages the brain which leads to both nervous attacks and mental disorders ,and also weakens the memory and the ability to attention .
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    • Additionally , this poison damages the brain which leads to both nervous attacks and mental disorders ,and, also weakens theing memory and the ability to attention focus.
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    • Additionally , this poiCertain drugs alson damages the brain which leads to boand may result in impairment of the nervous attacks andsystem, the onset of some mental disorders , and also weakens the memory and the ability to/or result in impairment of memory and reduced attention span.
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    • Ultimately, drugs hurts the stomach and causes problems in the appetite which in turn leads to losing weight.
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    • Ultimately, drugs hurts the stomach and causes problems win the appetite which in turn leads to losing weight loss.
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    • Ultimately, drugs hurts the stomach and causes problems in the appetite which in turnDrugs nay also damage the digestion system and leads to losingsignificant unwanted weight loss.
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