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Text from 23112016 - English

  • Tell me about yourself

    • My mame Is Byron Castillo , I was born un Guatemala City , I live in zone 18 wiht my family , I have a daugther she Is 6 years old , I am Married , I have married for around 8 years , my last job experiences was two mounts ago.
    • I was working un papelera luz , I worked there for around 15 years , I got really good experiences , in that company and I worked there un diferentes positions , por example my first positions was un manufactered área after that I was warehouse manager and my last positions was store manager , at the same Time I was studying english ,I hace Been study english for around two years , I am looking for this oportunity in orden to improve my english and my knoledge and provide to my family better oprtunities and bettrer future.

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    • My mame Is Byron Castillo , I was born un Guatemala City , I live in zone 18 wiht my family , I have a daugther she Is 6 years old , I am Married , I have married for around 8 years , my last job experiences was two mounts ago.
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    • My mame Is Byron Castillo , I was born un Guatemala City , I live in zone 18 wihth my family , I have a daugthter, she Iis 6 years old , I am Mmarried , I have been married for around 8 years , my last job experiences wasere two mounts ago.
    • My mname Is Byron Castillo ,. I was born uin Guatemala City ,. I live in zone 18 wihth my family ,. I have a daugther shter. She Iis 6 years old ,. I am Mmarried ,. I have been married for around 8 years , m. My last job experiences was ended two mounths ago.
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    • I was working un papelera luz , I worked there for around 15 years , I got really good experiences , in that company and I worked there un diferentes positions , por example my first positions was un manufactered área after that I was warehouse manager and my last positions was store manager , at the same Time I was studying english ,I hace Been study english for around two years , I am looking for this oportunity in orden to improve my english and my knoledge and provide to my family better oprtunities and bettrer future.
      Vote now!
    • I was working at un papelera luz , I worked there for around 15 years , I got really good experiences , in that company and I worked there unat differentes positions , pfor example my first positions was unat the manufactered áuring area after that I was a warehouse manager and my last positions was a store manager , at the same Ttime I was studying english ,I hacve Bbeen study eEnglish for around two years , I am looking for thise opportunity in orden to improve my englishlanguage skills and my knowledge, and provide to my family better opportunities and bettrer future. ¶
    • I was working un pat Papelera lLuz ,. I worked there for around 15 years ,. I got really goodhave gotten much experiences , working that company andere. I worked athere un differentes positions , pin that company. For example, my first positions was unin the manufactered área auring department. After that, I was warehouse manager and my last positions was store manager , a. At the same Ttime I was studying eEnglish. ,I hacve Bbeen study eing English for around two years ,. I am looking forward to this opportunity in ordenr to improve my eEnglish and my knowledge and provide to my familyalso to provide better opportunities and a bettrer future. ¶
      to my family.
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