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    • My family

    • I’m a new English language learners ,so i was confused about which topic should write about therefore, i choose a simple topic which is my family.
    • I grew up in a family consist of my parents,one sister and one brother.
    • My father is a school director while my Mather is a teacher .they first met in a school where both of them was working in .My sister is one year older than me ,and we go to the same university; however , we have a totally different personalities .
    • My brother is the youngest member in our small family ;he is three years younger than me ;he is very kind,considerate and clever dispite of his age ;he really is a very special brother .
    • Although we have some problems and fights from time to time,but we still love each other very much, and I’m so grateful for this beautiful family.

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    • I’m a new English language learners ,so i was confused about which topic should write about therefore, i choose a simple topic which is my family.
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    • I’mAs a new English language learners ,so i I was confused about which topic I should write about . I therefore, i choose a simple topic which is 'my family'.
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    • I’m a new English language learners , so iI was confused about which topic should write about therefore, iI choose a simple topic which is my family.
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  • Sentence 3
    • My father is a school director while my Mather is a teacher .they first met in a school where both of them was working in .My sister is one year older than me ,and we go to the same university; however , we have a totally different personalities .
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    • My father is a school director while my Mamother is a teacher .t. They first met in a school where both of them wasere working in . My sister is one year older than me ,and we go to the same university;, however , we have a totally different personalities .
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    • My father is a school director while my Mather is a teacher .they first met in a school where both of them wasere working in . My sister is one year older than me , and we go to the same university; however , we have a totally different personalities .
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  • Sentence 4
    • My brother is the youngest member in our small family ;he is three years younger than me ;he is very kind,considerate and clever dispite of his age ;he really is a very special brother .
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    • My brother is the youngest member inof our small family ;h. He is three years younger than me ; he is very kind, considerate, and clever diespite of his age ;h. He really is a very special brother .
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    • My brother is the youngest member inof our small family ; he is three years younger than me ; he is very kind, considerate, and clever diespite of his age ; he really is a very special brother .
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  • Sentence 5
    • Although we have some problems and fights from time to time,but we still love each other very much, and I’m so grateful for this beautiful family.
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    • Although we have some problems and fights from time to time,but we still love each other very much, and I’m so grateful for this beautiful family.
      StewYorkshireStewYorkshire profile picture Comments
    • Although we have some problems and fights from time to time,but we still love each other very much, and I’m so grateful for this beautiful family.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5