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- How do certain kinds of music make you feel
Hello.
- From my point of view music affect in our soul and it can make our day.
- If we listen happy music is clear we earn energy and if listen unhappy or dep music we do earn energy.
- So music is significant and affective.

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- How do certain kinds of music make you feel
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- How do certain kinds of music make you feel ?
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- Hello.
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- From my point of view music affect in our soul and it can make our day.
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- From my point of view music affect ins our soul and it can make our day.
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- From my point of view, music affect ins our soul and it can make our day.
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- If we listen happy music is clear we earn energy and if listen unhappy or dep music we do earn energy.
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- If we listen to happy music, it is clear ~~we earn~~that we can become more energyetic and if we listen to unhappy or dep music ~~we do earn energy.~~then we are also energised.
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- If we listen to happy music is clear we earn energy and if listen to unhappy or dep music we do earn energy.
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- So music is significant and affective.
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- So music is significant and aeffective.
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- So music is significant and aeffective.
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