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  • What type of music do you like or dislike?

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    • I usually listen to music and the type of music isn’t significant for me because in my mind options that are important to choose a music is song lyric, singer and rythem but I don’t know why I hate rock music.it make me nervous and give me stress and it rythem is very fast in totally I dislike rock music.
  • To choose a music I’m strick ti choose a music because I respect to my self.

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    • I usually listen to music and the type of music isn’t significant for me because in my mind options that are important to choose a music is song lyric, singer and rythem but I don’t know why I hate rock music.it make me nervous and give me stress and it rythem is very fast in totally I dislike rock music.
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    • I usually listen to music and the type of music isn’t significant for me because in my mind the options that are important tofor choose aing music isare the song lyrics, singer and rhythem butm. However I don’t know why I hate rock music.i It makes me nervous and gives me stress and itwith a rhythem which is very fast in. I totally I dislike rock music.!
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