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    • i prefer breathable and pratical cloth, kind of sport cloth, because i dont like wear heigh heels.
    • though literacy is a vital ability for child, it does not mean the early begin this activity is better, because every ability has representative sensitive development time, letting children gain the skill more quickly than any period.
  • with the increasingly available to 3 dimension technique, it has been introduced into guangdong local operas' performances, giving multisensory experiences to audiences.
  • though talking books were very heat when it aroused, it still cannot substitute for the traditional books.
  • with the multimedia becoming wildly available, it give an access for learners to a more efficience learning, because the multimedia makes people have multisensory feelings.
    • as the saying 'clothes make the man', thus the young would desire to buy new decent clothes, creating wasteful consumption.
    • i quite like buying stuff on line without any persuading or pressure from the shopkeeper, but i have a mixed feeling with it, because it arouse the desires to buy new things and leave me dissatisfied until i find something cheap and good quality, which is kind of time consuming. what's worse, shopping on line would creat conspicuous consumption easily.
    • to some extend, levying a higher tax on the high-income class is a mean to narrow the gap between the rich and the poor.
  • never before has the environmental problem aroused the public attention, people alleviate the abject poverty at the cost of environment.
  • if you are planning to go abroad for further study, the cost of living should be taken into account.
  • actually, the definition of standard of living is not a simple questions, but there is no doubt that attitude effects our life more dramatically than money the public complain the prohibitively high price of health-care, not simply because the commercialization of health care system, but also the increasing cost of everything.

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    • i prefer breathable and pratical cloth, kind of sport cloth, because i dont like wear heigh heels.
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    • iI prefer breathable and practical clothes, kind of like sporting clothes, because iI don't like to wear heigh heels.
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    • iI prefer breathable and pratical cloth, kind ofconfortable clothes, like sport clothes, because i dont like to wear heigh heels.
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    • though literacy is a vital ability for child, it does not mean the early begin this activity is better, because every ability has representative sensitive development time, letting children gain the skill more quickly than any period.
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    • ¶tThough literacy is a vitaln important ability for a child, it does not mean the early begin this activat ity is better, because every ability has representaeasier. Every ability takes tivme sensitive development timeto develop, letting children gain the skill more quicklyer than any period.other ability.
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    • with the increasingly available to 3 dimension technique, it has been introduced into guangdong local operas' performances, giving multisensory experiences to audiences.
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    • with the multimedia becoming wildly available, it give an access for learners to a more efficience learning, because the multimedia makes people have multisensory feelings.
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    • as the saying 'clothes make the man', thus the young would desire to buy new decent clothes, creating wasteful consumption.
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    • as the saying 'clothes make the man', thus the, young people would desire to buy new decent clothes, creating wasteful consumption.
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    • i quite like buying stuff on line without any persuading or pressure from the shopkeeper, but i have a mixed feeling with it, because it arouse the desires to buy new things and leave me dissatisfied until i find something cheap and good quality, which is kind of time consuming. what's worse, shopping on line would creat conspicuous consumption easily.
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    • i quite like buying stuff on line without any persuading or pressure from the shopkeeper, but i have a mixed feeling with it, because it arouse the desires to buy new things and leave me dissatisfied until i find something cheap and good quality, which is kind of time consuming. what's worse, shopping on line would creat conspicuous consumption easily.
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    • to some extend, levying a higher tax on the high-income class is a mean to narrow the gap between the rich and the poor.
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    • ¶tTo some extendt, levying a higher tax on the high-income class is a means to narrow the gap between the rich and the poor.
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    • never before has the environmental problem aroused the public attention, people alleviate the abject poverty at the cost of environment.
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    • actually, the definition of standard of living is not a simple questions, but there is no doubt that attitude effects our life more dramatically than money the public complain the prohibitively high price of health-care, not simply because the commercialization of health care system, but also the increasing cost of everything.
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