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    • Question is about sleep

  • Why some people can sleep well while other people can’t?
    • Well, sleep well deepen to many things one of the related to calm of our mind if you be relax before sleep you can sleep well and another important thing is don’t use cellphone it’s very affective.
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    • Well, sleep well deepen to many things one of the related to calm of our mind if you be relax before sleep you can sleep well and another important thing is don’t use cellphone it’s very affective.
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    • Well, sleeping well will deepen ourselves to many things, one of theit is related to calmthe calmness of our mind; if you be relax before sleep, you can sleep well and another important thing is: don’t use cellphones, it’s very aeffective.
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    • Well, sleeping well deepen tos many things one of the related to the calm of our mind if you be relax before sleep you can sleep well and another important thing is don’t use cellphones it’s very aeffective.
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