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Text from MsPotato - English

    • Is this ok for my self introduction?

    • Hi my name is Gizelle, i am 21 years old, currently living in Philippines.
    • I am the youngest and only daughter of Ms and Mr De Guzman.
    • To tell you the truth, this course is not my choice, its my parents wish, what i really want is to become a firefighter someday.
    • But to be honest, i finally like this profession because i really like children.
    • Some of my strength is i have a long patient, i am a good and kind person and my weakness is also my personality, because as i said i am a good and kind person and shy to be added.
    • Because of this personality of mine some people take advantage of me, when they make mistake or they hurt me even its verbal or in physical aspect i always say ”No, its ok, im fine, don’t worry” because im too kind but deap inside of me i was really hurt.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • To tell you the truth, this course is not my choice, its my parents wish, what i really want is to become a firefighter someday.
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    • To tell you the truth, this course is not my choice, its but my parents' wish, w. What iI really want is toto do is become a firefighter someday.
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    • To tell you the truth, this course is not my choice, it's my parent's wish, what iI really want is to become a firefighter someday.
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    • Some of my strength is i have a long patient, i am a good and kind person and my weakness is also my personality, because as i said i am a good and kind person and shy to be added.
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    • Some of my strength is i have a longs are that I am really patient, i am and a good and kind person and m. My weakness is also my personality, because, as iI said i, I am a good and kind person and shy to be added. But also I'm shy.
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    • Some of my strength is iI have a long patientce, iI am a good and kind person and my weakness is also my personality, because as iI said iI am a good and kind person and shy to be added.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5
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    • Because of this personality of mine some people take advantage of me, when they make mistake or they hurt me even its verbal or in physical aspect i always say ”No, its ok, im fine, don’t worry” because im too kind but deap inside of me i was really hurt.
      Vote now!
    • Because of this personality of mine, some people take advantage of me, when they make a mistake or they hurt me e. Even itf it's verbal or in physical aspect iI always say ”No, its ok, iOK, I'm fine, don’t worry” because iI'm too kind b. But deaep inside of me iI was really hurt.
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    • Because of this personality of mine, some people take advantage of me, when they make a mistake or they hurt me even itf it's verbal or in physical aspect iI always say ”No, it's ok, iay, I'm fine, don’t worry because I” because iI'm too kind but deaep inside of me iI was really hurt.
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