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Text from Ramones1993 - English

  • Amazing trip

    • In the last vacation I went to the beach, I remember every details.
    • I have swum until arrive in an island, I have met a paradise.
    • There, I could enjoy the crystal clear water and I saw rare animals while I was diving.
    • It was amazing, I have already planned the next vacation.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English