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    • How do you feel about time that wasted?

    • Hi, it’s obvious when you know waste your time you find bad and horri feelings.
    • I want say an example , imagine you have much money in a ripped bag and you walk and you don’t know your bag is ripped so you arrived your place you open your bag and see don’t any money what feelings you might find ?

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    • I want say an example , imagine you have much money in a ripped bag and you walk and you don’t know your bag is ripped so you arrived your place you open your bag and see don’t any money what feelings you might find ?
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    • I want sayto try/write an example , i: Imagine you have mucha lot of money in a ripped bag, and you're walk anding but you don’t know your bag is ripped so. So, when you arrived at your place, you open your bag and see don’t any money what feelings you might find , how might you feel?
    • I want sayto provide an example , i: Imagine you have mucha lot of money in a ripped bag and y. You walk and you don't know your bag is ripped so. Then you arrived at your place youand open your bag and see don’tbut don't see any money w. What feelings you might find you experience?
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