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AIDER A CORRIGER MAINTENANT !Corrigé

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    • Which scale university or college is better

  • Some people believe that smaller colleges and universities provide students with a better educational experience by, for example, offering more individual attention to each student.
    • Other people believe that larger colleges and universities provide a better educational experience.
    • Which view do you agree with and why?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
    • I agree the first opinion which is smaller university provide students with better education experience.
    • At first, let we confirm define what is education?
    • Education is when students go to a college or university, the students can learn about something whatever is textbook or mental.
    • And in this progress, their students is happines and not sad.
    • When we confirm this define, I have three reasons to support my opinion.
    • The first reason is smaller universities or college are more power to focus students mental.
    • This meaning when student fall into problems, the tutor will more quickly find it.
    • Because there more less student.
    • This situation will more easily to find it.
    • And when student be find this bad mental, this meaning there are more chance to delate this question.
    • The students happiness will be better.
    • The secondary reason is there are less competition if there are a chance.
    • Let we image a situation, Today there a chance which is a student can to interview president at every university.
    • There are 1000 students go to sign up at the larger university.
    • But there are only 100 students to sign up at the smaller university.
    • For the smaller university, their student have more proportion to get this chance.
  • The final reason is the students relationship will be better, this reasons comes from my experience.
    • I study in Hong Kong where is a smaller university, and my friends study in US and this is larger university.
    • When we are talk about our life.
    • She always told me, when she make a new friends, their relationship will easier to end up, because the new friends will to make her new friends and forgot her.
    • There are many people can to meet after all.
    • But I not meet their case, our university is pretty smaller.
    • Even thought the guys want to make all of students that sample thing.

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