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  • Why do you like your hobbies so much?

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    • I like my hobbies because they learn to me and cause I improve and enjoy my life and earn good feeling also they cause when I think with myself , I think I’m useful person for my self and country and society,world.
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    • I like my hobbies because they learn to me and cause I improve and enjoy my life and earn good feeling also they cause when I think with myself , I think I’m useful person for my self and country and society,world.
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    • I like my hobbies because they ltearn toch me and because Ithey make me improve and enjoy my life and earn good feeling also they cause when I think with myself , Is. They also make me think I'm an useful person for my self and country and, society, and world.
    • I like my hobbies because they learn to me and cause I improve and enjoy my life and earn good feelings also they cause when I think withabout myself , I think I’m a useful person for my self and country and society,world.
      투표하세요!
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