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    • Learning to swim

    • Before the Covid 19 pandemic, in January of 202, I have started the swim classes in a local neighborhood school of swimming.
    • I bought for four classes per week because I had never experienced learn swing, so I was so exciting to do that.
    • It was a very good three months intense classes, until COVID-19 forced me to stop.
    • Not only this, COVID-19 forced me - all people over the world - to change the way we used to live.
    • That experience was a life change one, because I have never done a sport which I could say “that’s my thing”, and with swim, it was like that.
    • Dive into a pool is my cherry on top, it’s my peak of happiness.
    • During some openings of the lockdown, I could go back to my swim classes, and it was very great for me, my body and my mind.
    • Nowadays, I swim three times per week, it’s difficult to balance with work, taking care of my animals, studying for my LLM degree, studying languages and take care of my home, but I make a big effort to continuing my classes.
    • Because, at the end, I never regret to swan in the begging of my daily routine.

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    • Before the Covid 19 pandemic, in January of 202, I have started the swim classes in a local neighborhood school of swimming.
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    • Before the Covid 19 pandemic, in January of 2002, I have started the swim classes in a local neighborhood school of swimming.
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    • Before the Covid 19 pandemic, in January of 2020, I have started the swim classes inat a local neighborhood school of swimming.
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    • I bought for four classes per week because I had never experienced learn swing, so I was so exciting to do that.
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    • I bought for four classes per week because I had never experienced learning how to swingm, so I was so excitinged to do that.
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    • That experience was a life change one, because I have never done a sport which I could say “that’s my thing”, and with swim, it was like that.
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    • That experience was a life changeing one, because I have never done a sport which I could say “that’s my thing”, and with swimming, it was like that.
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    • That experienceLearning to swim was a life change one, becauseing experience for me. I have never done a sport in which I could say “that’s my thing”, and,” but with swimming, it was like that.
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    • During some openings of the lockdown, I could go back to my swim classes, and it was very great for me, my body and my mind.
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    • During some openings ofin the lockdown, I could go back to my swim classes, and it was very great for me, my body and my mind.
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    • Nowadays, I swim three times per week, it’s difficult to balance with work, taking care of my animals, studying for my LLM degree, studying languages and take care of my home, but I make a big effort to continuing my classes.
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    • Nowadays, I swim three times per week. However, it’s difficult to balance with work, taking care of my animals, studying for my LLM degree, studying languages and takeing care of my home, but I make a big effort to continuinge my classes.
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    • Nowadays, I swim three times per week, i. It’s difficult to balance with work, taking care of my animals, studying for my LLM degree, studying languages and takeing care of my home, but I make a big effort to continuing my classes.
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