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    • May 25rd

    • Today was a boring week, On Monday, my boss leave off job, my new boss is a stupid man, he decided finish all meetings that we have programed.
    • Always we have lunch or coffee and talk about ourself, but now, he decide that we just work work work.
    • Before I just talk with him just five or six times in three years, I’ve never listened say something good about my team, and now is my boss, its a terrible decition, he is harm my team, people that I signed on for theirs capacities, in the afternoon, one guy told me that perhabs he leave off the job.
    • Everything isn’t bad, I’ve stayed some more time with my family, before I wasn’t have anymore to pass with my family, for the next weekend we’d like to have an special dinner in the farm.

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    • Today was a boring week, On Monday, my boss leave off job, my new boss is a stupid man, he decided finish all meetings that we have programed.
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    • Today washis week has been a boring week,. On Monday, my boss leave offft the job, my new boss is a stupid man, he decided finish allto cancel all of the meetings that we have programarranged.
      투표하세요!
    • Today was a boring week,. On Monday, my boss leave offft the job, m. My new boss is a stupid man, h. He decided finish allcancel all the meetings that we have programscheduled.
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  • 문장 2
    • Always we have lunch or coffee and talk about ourself, but now, he decide that we just work work work.
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    • AWe always weused to have lunch orand coffee and talk about ourself, but now, he decide that wetogether and chat, but since the new boss arrived it's just work work work.
    • Always weWe used to have lunch orand coffee and talk about ourself, but now, hebreaks and we could chat, but our new boss has decided that we should just work, work, work.
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    • Before I just talk with him just five or six times in three years, I’ve never listened say something good about my team, and now is my boss, its a terrible decition, he is harm my team, people that I signed on for theirs capacities, in the afternoon, one guy told me that perhabs he leave off the job.
      투표하세요!
    • Before I just talkhe took over as boss, I spoke with him justonly five or six times inover three years, I’ve never listened say something good about my team, and nowand not did I ever him him say something positive my colleagues. Now he is myour boss, its a terrible decitsion, as he is harmful to my team, people that I signed onenlisted for theirs capacities, in th skills. One afternoon, onea guy told me that perhabs he leave off the jobhe was thinking about quitting.
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    • Everything isn’t bad, I’ve stayed some more time with my family, before I wasn’t have anymore to pass with my family, for the next weekend we’d like to have an special dinner in the farm.
      투표하세요!
    • Everything isn’t bad, I’ve stayed some more time with my family, before I wasn’t have anymore to pass with my family, for theBut it's not all bad, I’ve been spending more time with my family than I used to and next weekend we’d like to have an special dinner inat the farm.
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