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    • an adventure career

    • Geology is a career which has pros and cons: My friend is a senior geologist who travel to find new mineralized zones and mines.
    • His salary level is excellent, long term employment, well-known company and exploring new thing is some good features of his job.
    • Last Year he went to a country side to exploring a mine.
    • “A predator attacks on me, I realize it will hunt me and I’ll be a delicious prey for it.
    • Suddenly my friends came and it ran out”. He said.
    • Afterward, he changed his mind and says: we ought to protect animals habitat, protecting from extinctions even some of them are dangerous.

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    • Geology is a career which has pros and cons: My friend is a senior geologist who travel to find new mineralized zones and mines.
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    • Geology is a career which has pros and cons:¶
      . My friend is a senior geologist who travel to find news in search of mineralized zones and mines.
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    • His salary level is excellent, long term employment, well-known company and exploring new thing is some good features of his job.
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    • His salary level is excellent, long term employment, well-known company and exploring new thing is some good features of his jobA few nice things about his job: He is employed by a well-known company, is well paid with long-term employment and gets to explore new places.
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    • Afterward, he changed his mind and says: we ought to protect animals habitat, protecting from extinctions even some of them are dangerous.
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    • Afterwards, he changed his mind and says: wid: "We ought to protect the animal's habitat, protecting them from extinctions even though some of them are dangerous. "
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