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    • Day out at Altafulla

    • Yesterday I saw in my planning offers app it will be a vintage market in Altafulla.
    • My wife sometimes said to go to Altafulla so it will be a perfect day out for our family.
  • Today I woke up early in the morning to do some workouts and then prepare breakfast, buy bread and make sandwiches for lunch.
  • After having breakfast we took the car directly to Altafulla.
  • An hour later we were in Altafulla.
  • The day was shiny and warm, a perfect spring day with almost summer weather.
  • We enjoyed the market and even more the beach.
  • It was a pity that we didn’t wear swimming suits.
  • We had lunch at the beach and after having an ice cream we came back home.

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