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    • Some tourists places in Medellin: - Parque explora: Is a science park as the Maloka in Bogota.
    • The last Sunday I past the day there, the most representative there is the aquarium, the aquarium is the bigest of latin america, the vivarium and planetarium, I was interesting see the many water animals in the aquarium that I never have seen.
    • - Botanical Garden of Medellín: Is bynear to the Parque explora, I was interesting because we take a luch in a train cabin and past the day surrounded of many and high trees.
    • - The Castel and gardens: I couldn’t believe it, a fairy tail castel into the city, the place works as a museum, I was beautiful but I was more amazing the gardes and water sources around the castel, you must take a picture.
    • Exist others places to visit, but I didn’t have many time, for that reason my friends suggested go to the Guatape ville.
    • Is a ville with many old and coloured houses, is a good plan to have a day trip and go to the pretty little lakeside town and the Peñol rock, is stunning.
    • I have good memories of that day.

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    • The last Sunday I past the day there, the most representative there is the aquarium, the aquarium is the bigest of latin america, the vivarium and planetarium, I was interesting see the many water animals in the aquarium that I never have seen.
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    • The last Sunday I passpent the day there, t. The most reimpresentativesive thing there is the aquarium, the aquarium which is the biggest of lin Latin aAmerica, the There is also a vivarium and planetarium, I and it was interesting see the many water animals in the aquarium that I had never have seenseen before.
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    • - Botanical Garden of Medellín: Is bynear to the Parque explora, I was interesting because we take a luch in a train cabin and past the day surrounded of many and high trees.
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    • - Botanical Garden of Medellín: Is bynearclose by to the Parque explora, It was interesting because we take ahad lunch in a train cabin and passpent the day surrounded of many anda lot of high trees.
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    • - The Castel and gardens: I couldn’t believe it, a fairy tail castel into the city, the place works as a museum, I was beautiful but I was more amazing the gardes and water sources around the castel, you must take a picture.
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    • - The Castele and gardens: I couldn’t believe it, a fairy tail castele into the city, the place which works as a museum,. It was beautiful but Iit was more amazing in the gardens and water sources around the castel, yle. You must take a picture.
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    • Is a ville with many old and coloured houses, is a good plan to have a day trip and go to the pretty little lakeside town and the Peñol rock, is stunning.
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    • It's a villetown with many old and coloured houses, i. I's a good planidea to have a day trip and go to the pretty little lakeside town and see the Peñol rock, which is stunning.
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