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Text from Sonya_Chas - English

  • ______________THE OTTER-MAN _____________

  • It all started the day I met a deeply interesting person.
  • Then I didn’t know this person would change my whole life.
    • And now, of course, I have golden opportunity to tell you what happened to me.
  • One day I was walking calmly around the city.
    • The all citizens was incredibly friendly and kind.
    • Aside I observed one upset man.
    • I approched him to ask: - What’s going on?
  • And he replied: - Just nobody loves otter-man...
    • Then he had turned and l saw terribly thing.
  • IT WAS A REAL OTTER-MAN!
    • Apparently it was very unexpectedlyunexpectedly, for the reason I Immediately fell.
    • I didn’t believe my eyes!
    • I thought the man looks like my old best friend.
  • I looked at the man and the man looked at me.
    • It had been happening for approximately two minutes before I said: Dude, it isn’t a trouble. what is your name?
  • - Do you really want to hear my name? said the stranger.
  • I was confused.
    • What did i had to do?
    • - One man, who had heared my full name have died! continued strange man.
    • I knew about this man frighteningly little, however i desided to hear it.
  • - My name has a really interesting story. began otter-man.
    • I belong to Ancient Family of guardians, guardians of cities.
    • Each of my relatives in city which he guards.
  • We are all from Africa.
  • My parents are nomands, so my brothers and I were born in different states.
    • I was born when we were in Chad, so my name is Chad, but surname....a little bit killing, what’s why i didn’t want to say It to you.
  • Even with my experience, I knew absolutely nothing about city guards!
  • But why does a man look like an otter?
  • Now it doesn’t matter.
    • I realised people in modern cities like New York City don’t accept people who different from them.
    • About that person, I desided to walk together for him to tell me about guardians of cities.
  • He had began his story, but suddenly stopped.
  • He said me: Man, we have known each other for 15 minutes, but I still don’t know who you are and what is your name.
    • I cant trust you with all my secrets without knowing anything about you!
    • What is your name, man?
    • Finally I replied: My name is Wong...just Wong, without surname.
    • And, Do you like Beyonce? Come on!
    • You’ve heard of her. she’s huge star, right?

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