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    • New products relese.

    • I use to laught about new products that were realesed frecuenttly because I feel this products doesn’t have notting new to show up when they are relesed month by month.
    • Currently I realize that the most affordeble products are that how are relese year by year and don’t month by month.
    • I have i teacher who is supe knowlege towords this new and her personality is super approdeble to. she tell me that this kind of products it not worth it. she has said that relese products month by month have to do with don’t cara towords the quality standford of the product and yes only care about money.

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    • I use to laught about new products that were realesed frecuenttly because I feel this products doesn’t have notting new to show up when they are relesed month by month.
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    • I use to laught about new products that were realeased frecquenttly because I feel thisese products doesn’n't have nottanything new to show up when they are released month byafter month.
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    • Currently I realize that the most affordeble products are that how are relese year by year and don’t month by month.
      투표하세요!
    • CurrentlyNow I realize that the most affordeable products are that how arose released year byafter year and don’not month byafter month.
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    • I have i teacher who is supe knowlege towords this new and her personality is super approdeble to. she tell me that this kind of products it not worth it. she has said that relese products month by month have to do with don’t cara towords the quality standford of the product and yes only care about money.
      투표하세요!
    • I have ia teacher who is supeith knowledge towords this new and her personality is super approdeble to. son the subject and with a very accessible personality. ¶
      S      he tellold me that this kind of products it not worth it. she has
      She       said that releseasing products month byafter month have to do with don’t cara towordsproves not caring about the quality standford of the product and yes only carebut only about money. ¶
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