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  • The evolution of the commute and tasks

    • During the years I has realized that the commute has been updating a great ideal.
    • If we look back and think how the way to commute to our jobs has changeted over the years we would get impressted because the evolution had been super big.
    • A few yars ago if we wanted commute to ours jobs probally the only way would be using bikes, walking our up tu take a bus, which I Don,t know if there were bus in the pass.
    • Today we might use cars, subway and eletric bikes.
    • It is amazying!
    • Toword ous tasks the change is seriuslly visible, and anciant there are no adevisers or tools to help us in ours tasks, today we have machines and advisers wich can make all process to us.
    • This part os evolution is really amazing when it cames to tasks.
    • Probably towords tasks the evolution hit us stronger than never.
    • The humanity realy take advantage from this evolution and i feel that we never can take this evolution for grantad.

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    • If we look back and think how the way to commute to our jobs has changeted over the years we would get impressted because the evolution had been super big.
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    • If we look back and think about how the way towe commute to our jobs has changeted over the years, we would getbe impressted because the evolution hads been supero big.
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    • If we look back and think how the way toabout how we commute to our jobs has changeted over the years then we would get impressted because theits evolution hads been superextremely big.
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    • A few yars ago if we wanted commute to ours jobs probally the only way would be using bikes, walking our up tu take a bus, which I Don,t know if there were bus in the pass.
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    • A few years ago, if we wanted to commute to ours jobs, probalbly the only way would be using bikes, walking our up tuup, or takeing a bus, which I Ddon,'t know if there were buses in the pass.
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    • A few years ago, if we wanted commute to ours jobs then probalbly the only way would be using bikes, walking our up tu take a bus, whichtaking a bus. I Ddon,'t know if there were buses in the passt.
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    • Toword ous tasks the change is seriuslly visible, and anciant there are no adevisers or tools to help us in ours tasks, today we have machines and advisers wich can make all process to us.
      투표하세요!
    • Toword ousFor many tasks, the change is seriuslparticularly visible, and anciaently, there are no adevisers or tools to help us in ours tasks,; today we have machines and advisers wichthat can make all process toes for us.
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    • Toword ousFor many tasks the change is seriuslclearly visible, and anciant. Previously there awere no adeviseors or tools to help us in ours tasks, t. Today we have machines and advisers which can make all process todo everything for us.
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    • The humanity realy take advantage from this evolution and i feel that we never can take this evolution for grantad.
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    • The hHumanity really takes advantage ofrom this evolution, and iI feel that we can never can take this evolution for grantaed.
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    • The hHumanity really does take advantage ofrom this evolution and iI feel that we should never can take this evolution for grantaed.
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