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  • My role model is Selena Gomes.

  • My role model is Selena Gomes.
    • She is a singer, very talented, beautiful and kind.
    • She played in many films and voiced some.Selena released the popular song ’’love you like a love song’’ in 2011.
    • She inspires me because she achieved everything herself and became successful.
    • Were bad moments in her life, but she wasn’t sad and was herself.

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    • She is a singer, very talented, beautiful and kind.
      투표하세요!
    • She is a singer, very talented, beautiful and kind.

      You could also write:¶
      She is a very talented singer. She is beautiful and kind.
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    • She is a singer, very talented, beautiful and kindbeautiful, kind and talented singer.
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    • She is a singer, very talented, beautiful and kind.

      ***Perfectly fine as is. "very talented" by itself here implies that she has a spectrum of talents.¶

      Given that she is also an actress, then it would imply that she has other talents than being a singer. If you wanted to emphasise that her primary and only talent was being a singer, then the word order is "a very talented singer". Word order counts!!!
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    • She played in many films and voiced some.Selena released the popular song ’’love you like a love song’’ in 2011.
      투표하세요!
    • She playhas appeared in many films and voiced some.provided voice over in other films. in 2011 Selena released the popular song ’’lLove you like a love song’’ in 2011.
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    • She playelena acted in many films and, voiced some.Selena released characters and released, in 2011, the popular song ’’lLove yYou lLike a lLove sSong’’ in 2011.
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