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Text from Asishi - English

  • Picnic

  • Hi.
    • Have you ever gone picnic?
    • Do you like picnic?
    • How many times you go picnic?
    • Well, if I want reply these questions, I should say: yes, I truly love it and my family and I go picnic lots.
    • And how much times I have go picnic and enjoy in my mind picnic is great for rest of our souls and restart ourselves.
    • From my point of view we can make happy our life with small things like this.

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