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  • Interview

  • I hope you have seen my CV.
    • I’m going to say something about myself that is not in that CV.
  • I am a child of a rural middle class family.
    • .I grew up struggling not to get it since I was a child so I have to learn how to be patient in anything and how to achieve anything through struggle.
    • While in school and college, I gained leadership by participating in various blood donation organizations, clubs, organizing sports, debating competitions.
    • By gaining a bachelor’s degree, I have gained expertise in academic matters.
    • As my subject is zoology, I have acquired knowledge about animals, environment, genetic engineering, ecology, etc. In order to increase efficiency, we have acquired the qualities of computer, network, digital communication, driving etc. by competing with the present Digital Bangladesh.
    • I have been able to use various social media for entertainment as well as meet my financial needs by selling various digital marketing products to meet my financial needs as well as digital marketing.
  • Through tuition during my studies, I have learned how to overcome specific obstacles and achieve specific goals at certain times.
    • Above all, I can say that to survive in the battle of life, I am also a trainee soldier like others .

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    • .I grew up struggling not to get it since I was a child so I have to learn how to be patient in anything and how to achieve anything through struggle.
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    • .I grew up struggling not to get it(?) since I was a child so I have to learn how to be patient in anything and everything and also how to achieve anything through struggles.
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    • While in school and college, I gained leadership by participating in various blood donation organizations, clubs, organizing sports, debating competitions.
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    • While in school and college, I gained leadership skills by participating in various blood donation organizations, clubs, organizing sports, and debating competitions.
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    • As my subject is zoology, I have acquired knowledge about animals, environment, genetic engineering, ecology, etc. In order to increase efficiency, we have acquired the qualities of computer, network, digital communication, driving etc. by competing with the present Digital Bangladesh.
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    • As my subjectmajor is zoology, I have acquired knowledge about animals, environment, genetic engineering, ecology, etcand other related subjects.¶
      In order to increase efficiency,       weI have acquired the qualities of using computers, network,managing networks, engaging in digital communication, driving etc., and others by competing with the present Digital Bangladesh.
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    • I have been able to use various social media for entertainment as well as meet my financial needs by selling various digital marketing products to meet my financial needs as well as digital marketing.
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    • I have been able to use various social media for entertainment as well as meet my financial needs by selling various digital marketing products to meet my financial needs as well as digital marketing.
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  • Sentence 9
    • Through tuition during my studies, I have learned how to overcome specific obstacles and achieve specific goals at certain times.
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