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- hello，gugs，I am a chinese student and i need your help to improve my english ,and i will help you too! thanks

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- hello，gugs，I am a chinese student and i need your help to improve my english ,and i will help you too! thanks
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- hHello， gugys，I am a cChinese student and iI need your help to improve my eEnglish ~~,and i~~. I will help you, too~~! t~~. Thanks!
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- hHello，,gu~~gs，~~ys!I am a cChinese student and iI need your help to improve my eEnglish ~~,and i~~.I will help you too~~! t~~.Thanks!
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- hHello， gu~~gs，~~ys! I am a chinese student and i need your help to improve my english ~~,and~~. In return i will help ~~you too! thanks~~learn my language! ¶¶Yours,
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