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Scriptum ab Aleismyname - English

  • I’m still twelve

    • I just turned sixteen, my birthday is on December second.
    • When I was younger, I use to love my birthday, my whole family and all my friends arrived to my house, I get lots of presents, and It was enchanting, then I turned twelve, and no one of my friends came, at that time I really didn’t have any friend.
    • Ten days before my 13th birthday my grandmother died, that was the worst day of my life, that year we didn’t celebrate.
    • On my 14th birthday I cry all the day, it was the first time I realized that I was ”getting older” I started to think about my future, I had no idea about what I want to do with my life and that scared me (I don’thave a clue yet).
    • Also I was still having no friends.
    • Next year the pandemia began, turning fifteen is important in my country, all girls have huge parties with white dresses, I just got a cake and some congratulation message.
    • Lastly, my 16th birthday, I just woke up at 4 in the evening and ate some chips.
  • I wish my birthdays were as important as they were in the past.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • When I was younger, I use to love my birthday, my whole family and all my friends arrived to my house, I get lots of presents, and It was enchanting, then I turned twelve, and no one of my friends came, at that time I really didn’t have any friend.
      Elige nunc !
    • When I was younger, I used to love my birthday, m. My whole family and all my friends arrived to my house,. I geot lots of presents, and Iit was enchanting, t. Then I turned twelve, and no one of my friends came, a. At that time I really didn’'t have any friend.
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    • When I was younger, I used to love my birthday, m. My whole family and all my friends arrived ato my house, I geot lots of presents, and Iit was enchanting, t. Then I turned twelve, and no one of my friends came, a. At that time, I really didn’t have any friends.
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    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 2ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 2
  • Sententia 3
    • Ten days before my 13th birthday my grandmother died, that was the worst day of my life, that year we didn’t celebrate.
      Elige nunc !
    • Ten days before my 13th birthday my grandmother died, t. That was the worst day of my life, t. That year we didn’'t celebrate my birthday.
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    • Ten days before my 13th birthday, my grandmother died, t. That was the worst day of my life, t. That year we didn’t celebrate.
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    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 3ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 3
  • Sententia 4
    • On my 14th birthday I cry all the day, it was the first time I realized that I was ”getting older” I started to think about my future, I had no idea about what I want to do with my life and that scared me (I don’thave a clue yet).
      Elige nunc !
    • On my 14th birthday, I cryied all the day, i. It was the first time I realized that I was ”getting older”. I started to think about my future,. I had no idea about what I wanted to do with my life and that scared me (I don’tand I still don't have a clue yet).
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    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 4ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 4
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    • Next year the pandemia began, turning fifteen is important in my country, all girls have huge parties with white dresses, I just got a cake and some congratulation message.
      Elige nunc !
    • NextThe following year the pandemiac began, t. Turning fifteen is important in my country, a. All girls have huge parties with white dresses,. I just got a cake and somea congratulationory message.
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    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 6ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 6
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